Kimberly Moniz

Crafting Words That Convert



Below is a four-email sequence for Book Haven that uses the 4 Ps (Promise, Picture, Proof, Push) structure for the overall sequence, and the AIDA (Attention, Interest, Desire, Action) framework for the content of each email.

Email 1: Promise – Introducing the Subscription Box

Subject: Discover Your Next Favorite Read with Book Haven!

Hi [Recipient’s Name],
Are you tired of searching for the perfect book, only to end up disappointed?

Book Haven is here to solve that problem. With our monthly subscription box, you’ll receive a handpicked bestseller along with exclusive goodies, making your reading experience magical!

Imagine receiving a beautifully packaged box filled with a novel you can’t put down, along with treats that enhance your reading journey. Each box is designed to surprise and delight you!

Don’t miss out! Keep an eye out for our next email to learn how you can join our literary adventure!

Email 2: Picture – Highlighting the Experience

Subject: Your Perfect Reading Companion Awaits!

Hi [Recipient’s Name],
Are you ready to transform your reading experience?

With Book Haven, you’ll receive a curated selection of bestselling books and delightful surprises every month. Our subscription box is designed for readers like you who crave excitement in their literary journey.

Imagine cozying up with a new book, excited to dive into a gripping story while enjoying a themed bookmark, a snack, or a surprise item that enhances the experience. It’s not just reading; it’s an adventure!

Stay tuned for our next email where we’ll share a limited-time offer just for you!

Email 3: Proof – Building Credibility

Subject: Join Thousands of Happy Readers at Book Haven!

Hi [Recipient’s Name],
Have you heard about the Book Haven community?

We’re not just a subscription box; we’re a vibrant community of over 5,000 book lovers who share a passion for reading. Each month, our subscribers come together to discuss their favorite reads, share insights, and bond over their love for books.

By joining Book Haven, you’re not just receiving a box; you’re becoming part of a family that celebrates literature and discovery. Picture yourself discussing the latest bestseller with like-minded individuals who share your passion!

Don’t miss your chance to join us! Keep an eye out for our next email with an exclusive offer just for you!

Email 4: Push – The Exclusive Offer

Exclusive Offer: 20% Off Your First Book Haven Box!

Hi [Recipient’s Name],
Are you ready to dive into a world of books with Book Haven?

For a limited time, we’re offering 20% off your first subscription box! It’s the perfect opportunity to experience the joy of receiving a carefully curated selection of books and goodies tailored just for you.

Imagine opening your first box and discovering a bestselling book that transports you to another world, along with exclusive items that enhance your reading experience. This is your chance to elevate your reading journey without the commitment.

Don’t wait—this exclusive offer is available only until the end of the week! Click below to secure your discount and start your Book Haven adventure today!

[Subscribe Now]

Happy Reading,
The Book Haven Team


This email sequence effectively utilizes the 4 Ps framework for structure while employing AIDA in each email’s content. It creates a compelling narrative that guides the reader through the problem, engages their interest, ignites their desire, and drives them to take action. Enjoy launching your email campaign!